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... Same as the old boss. Probably my favorite punny title so far
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Now this is the chapter that introduces the shameless nudist, the first Gym Leader and the one that pretty much not only breaks tradition in terms of the order of Gyms, but also bringing things back to the roots of Gen I. She was pretty much created at the same time with Valentina, along with Narcissa and Narelle, and when it came to naming her, I did want to keep her to the Western theme... didn't realize that the name conflicts with two protagonists names! Oh well, it's not like they're going to be involved in this story anyway, and it's going to be a little hard to not run into double names.
Also Viridian has gone through so many hands, hasn't it? Not only in the games, but in the anime as well. So many different people running this one Gym, each doing their own thing. And here comes Rosa-May wanting to get back to the roots and give the Gym the proper treatment.
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Pokémon - (C) Nintendo & Game Freak
Concept - Gyarretto7
Story & Original Characters - TheArcticDemon
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Now this is the chapter that introduces the shameless nudist, the first Gym Leader and the one that pretty much not only breaks tradition in terms of the order of Gyms, but also bringing things back to the roots of Gen I. She was pretty much created at the same time with Valentina, along with Narcissa and Narelle, and when it came to naming her, I did want to keep her to the Western theme... didn't realize that the name conflicts with two protagonists names! Oh well, it's not like they're going to be involved in this story anyway, and it's going to be a little hard to not run into double names.
Also Viridian has gone through so many hands, hasn't it? Not only in the games, but in the anime as well. So many different people running this one Gym, each doing their own thing. And here comes Rosa-May wanting to get back to the roots and give the Gym the proper treatment.
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Previous Chapter | Next Chapter
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Pokémon - (C) Nintendo & Game Freak
Concept - Gyarretto7
Story & Original Characters - TheArcticDemon
Mature
© 2015 - 2024 TheArcticDemon
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Good chapter again!
Strip battle? Like strip poker... And cool how Rosa-May says lots of Cinnabar Island-natives are nudists!
One piece of advice though... The use of 'the nudist' gets quite repetitive. Synonyms for that, or other descriptions of Valentina, would add some more variety. For example, 'the blonde-haired girl', 'the blonde', 'the girl', 'the Pokemon trainer', 'the girl from Cinnabar', and if you want to draw attention to her nudity, 'the naked girl', 'the girl whose skin was exposed' or something like that.
On a positive note, I like the contrast of Rosa-May enjoying the flirty and even creepy remarks from men, and seemed to enjoy adult-only stuff, while Valentina did not like it and did not know or understand all the stuff that happens at adult-only locations and/or adult-only events.
Strip battle? Like strip poker... And cool how Rosa-May says lots of Cinnabar Island-natives are nudists!
One piece of advice though... The use of 'the nudist' gets quite repetitive. Synonyms for that, or other descriptions of Valentina, would add some more variety. For example, 'the blonde-haired girl', 'the blonde', 'the girl', 'the Pokemon trainer', 'the girl from Cinnabar', and if you want to draw attention to her nudity, 'the naked girl', 'the girl whose skin was exposed' or something like that.
On a positive note, I like the contrast of Rosa-May enjoying the flirty and even creepy remarks from men, and seemed to enjoy adult-only stuff, while Valentina did not like it and did not know or understand all the stuff that happens at adult-only locations and/or adult-only events.